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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Spooky Style Trace the core of their existence they'll promise you no resistance stretch their branches into time you'll see their innocent of crime. Scene takes place in the darkness some thought they saw a Lochness one man knew evil draped his home each day he watched images roam. Take note the facts upon your door the crimson red blood on the floor taste the red slivered apple slowly meet the ugly monster within wholly. Sniveled grins they grant the taker they only wanted to meet the shaker His rib laughter sets the stage afire than they were cooking within the fryer. The angels cold eyes were set free they beg you now to hear their plea the house of doom cast far away this was all an act in their crazy play. See the frail old man he tricked Treat than he removed all their soft seats they didn't observe him floating ship he wasn't allowed to be off on a trip. The stage is set in spooky style enough to make the devil smile actor's roles chosen for the best it's climax reaching over crest. Crimson red blood simply fake not a body to find drown in lake imagination's play finest at work yet maybe a monster does lurk. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmmmmm..leaves one to ponder a while...very good writing! dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
How real the actors and scenes can seem. I love the title of this. "...imagination's play finest at work yet maybe a monster does lurk" Makes one think..... |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I get this is a poem questioning influences. I like the style a lot. Regards Jon |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Mwahahamwahahaha.......almost feels like the "stute this poem, no wonder I love it !  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A 'spooky' poem indeed. Liked the title, liked the poem and liked the style, but did I get it all ?  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
dgvarner: Thanks for your reply, and still even leaves me pondering.  childomine: Thanks for reading and replying. Jon: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. You could be right, I never thought it that way till you mentioned it, but now I can see it. Lady in Red: Thanks for reading, now hurry and hide there's a wanted poster up with a reward for your return. Munda: Thanks my friend, does anyone ever get it all? |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Good poem. I enjoy gettin' "spooked" every now an then. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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