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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
0 posted 2000-06-03 11:16 AM

(With thanks to my brother Dennis for getting me started)

Hmmm, what might this be?
I'll go and investigate--
Oh no, Closing time!

Open, inviting
Both by appearance and scent
A fly, I'll tempt,Yum!!!


 "GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)
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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
1 posted 2000-06-03 11:23 AM

David, And a good start you have!! I liked it. Awaiting the next one.  marcy
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-06-03 11:52 AM

david: Cograts to you, on all this lovely Haiku!
When next we chat you have to teach me!
                  sis

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