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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Cold tendrils embraced my every waking They left icicle imprints on an already overindulged slightly taxed piece of me. My soul cried repetitiously wanton wishes Today I wiped away saddened heartbreaking melancholy. I shall not ponder the unattainable answers that toss me into soul-searching dialogue (There are no simple ones) I shall plunge forward into warmth and love No self destruction mechanisms - allowed. I will close my eyes taste your lips feel the tautness of skin. Inhale your scent Breathe in your breath. Lie half awake in it’s intoxication. Then I shall realize, I was never awake. The need was you - Is YOU. Until you are here lying next to me I shall hold this precious memory. This was a moment captured in my dreams YOU already know the “need.” Kdw, Copyright 2000 |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
A really interesting piece of writing, written with depth of feeling. |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Such wonderful depth of emotion in this piece. Simply beautiful! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I shall not ponder the unatainable answers". And yet you do, as do I. Would that we could find them. Yes, I relate to that poem most personally. Very beautifully presented. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
This poem leaves a lovely imprint on the reader. Very nice Jon |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Septsong.. Thank you for grasping the depth in this piece.. It certainly is soul searching to say the least.. and the feelings rushing forth faster then my mind can often handle. Jonas - *Kiss!* Catalinamoon: "I shall not ponder the unatainable answers". And yet you do, as do I. Would that we could find them. Yes, I relate to that poem most personally. Very beautifully presented. Yes, I definately do.. thank you for such a nice compliment and I am glad that you could relate so well to this piece. Jon, I am forever grateful for your warmth and this response: "This poem leaves a lovely imprint on the reader. Very nice" Thank you - each of you for taking a moment to read and to reply to me. Kim |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
kim..wonderful piece of soul-serching..the dream left me feeling in great need of that someone..well, i mean, MY someone! "The need was you - Is YOU. Until you are here lying next to me I shall hold this precious memory." can relate.... dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
dg, Thank you.. I think we all relate to the feelings of needing someone and our soul searching. I can hardly wait till he is home! Kim |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Lovely "dream" that, upon waking leaves you yearning. Beautiful and heartfelt. |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Thank you  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dearest Kim; How wonderful and delicously romantic! I love it! Now you have me in the mood, so I'll just go give my honey a kiss and know you inspired it! Love, Ellie 02 |
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