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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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come, stand beneath the flowers on my windowsill i will know you i will speak to you as though you are one of my precious flowers stay for a while i will listen to you speak softly whispering gleefully laughing playfully tickling each rose petal summer breeze come spend some time with me... "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Wow!!! I'm not really sure what else to say about this...talk about beautiful! Your poetry itself is like that warm summer breeze...soothing and calming, at the same time stirring up some happiness! Great piece as always, dg!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
Again a beautiful though. Are you waiting for the breeze  )breezeinnc |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I like! "summer breeze come spend some time with me..." Really good ending. Joy |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
This is so peaceful and magic...a moment to savor, just like the cool breeze that you entice to stay. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful!  Denise |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
dgv, Lovely, good listener are ya? Hard to come by these days. Beautiful thoughts penned to paper. marcy |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- i like this one alot. it made me smile...a peaceful and happy write. love ya, -tricks < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-10-2000).] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Very pretty, dg. And it is so nice to spend time with the summer breeze, isn't it? To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks all!! glad to have you enjoy this (marcy: yep..good listener am i )hugs, dg she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Neat. Very well done...Makes me want to hop up on your window sill, like a little bird, and just spend some quiet time... With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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