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Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

0 posted 2000-05-30 04:53 PM

Husband, I almost
stayed at home to wash my hair,
on the night we met.

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

1 posted 2000-05-30 05:19 PM

Cute.. could be a take off on some real funny lines.. I was tempted but I will spare you..!!

Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

2 posted 2000-05-30 05:42 PM

Try it Septsong, I'd love to see your addition!

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2000-05-30 09:07 PM

Brought a smile to my face

love the wit here

BTW,this is a senyru

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

4 posted 2000-05-31 11:54 AM

Debbie,
Way to go girl! This is short and sweet!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
As the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance!

D.L.White :^)

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2000-05-31 12:36 PM

Senryu? Haiku? Tanka? No matter..I like it!!

Wobbly Head Bob
Member

since 2000-05-15

Posts 299
Virginia, USA

6 posted 2000-05-31 03:17 PM

Hmm...maybe all the prospective women of my life are home washing thier hair. Well, atleast now I can stop wondering where they are! I loved it, Debbie, thank you!

Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

7 posted 2000-05-31 04:48 PM

Thanks Everyone, I'm glad you liked it!

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