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Not a haiku!

Ted Reynolds
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 331

0 posted 2000-05-30 03:48 PM

I've spoiled this haiku!
How did seventeen syllables
Become eighteen . . . huh?

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

1 posted 2000-05-30 03:52 PM

LOL...oh well..cute anyway!

"A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-05-30 04:06 PM

I think it was that da dum that went awry! Cute poem! LOL

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2000-05-30 09:09 PM

love your stuff,Ted.they never cease to amuse me

jenni
Member

since 1999-09-11

Posts 478
Washington D.C.

4 posted 2000-05-30 09:40 PM

ted--

lol, i liked this. you're one creative guy, ya know that? i miss seeing your stuff over in c/a.

thanks, as always, for giving me a smile.

catch ya later,

jenni

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

5 posted 2000-05-31 08:55 AM

Ted,
This looks like one of my earlier efforts, no, make that many of my early efforts, LOL
Thanks for the laugh! You've put a smile on my face :^)
Dennis :^)

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-06-01 08:40 PM

Very cute, Ted!

Denise

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