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Sunrise/Sunset Haiku

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-05-30 09:30 AM

Nocturnal dew clings
To each sleepy blade of grass
Sun!, diamond sparkles!

Sun retreats in west
Evening symphony begins
Cricket Concerto!

...............................

Moonbeams radiate
As the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance!

D.L.White :^)

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-05-30 09:36 AM

These are great Dennis they capture their subjects with skillful ease.

Nice

Jon

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

2 posted 2000-05-30 09:47 AM

Excellent Dennis!!

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2000-05-30 11:27 AM

I throw shoes at that cricket concerto!! LOL These are great...

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2000-05-30 11:48 AM

in my humble opinion, among all the haiku i have read from you, these two are by far the best...unique subjects(crickets), original description(nocturnal dew)....WOW

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

5 posted 2000-05-30 01:54 PM

I agree with all of the above. Haiku must be in your blood, you do it so well.

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

6 posted 2000-05-30 03:31 PM

gotta love that cricket concerto....

good ones!

"A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

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