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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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one of my few nature poems! short and simple! what do you think?? autumn breezes in blowing kisses to the leaves blushing they let go --dgvarner "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Very, very nice. Leaves (lol) one feeling warm and fuzzy. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Marvelous! I would say, and that is a big word for me but you made me think of it with this short message in poem. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
childomine and septsong..thanks so much for your responses! i'm glad you liked!  "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Great haiku here....i like the image "blowing kisses" and "blushing"...refreshing look on the leaves....nice  show us more of your haiku [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 05-28-2000).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Now this is a unique haiku! I loved the imagery! I especially love "autumn breezes in blowing kisses to the leaves." what a nice touch! Please share some more with us, I love haikus and senryus!Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks melissa so what is senryus?? i'm not real up on all the serious side of poetry--mostly just write to sift! "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Dgvarner, This is great, I hope you write more nature haikus! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate As the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance! D.L.White :^) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A SENRYU (Sen-ree-yoo) is a three lined unrhymed Japanese poetic form structurally similar to the Haiku (5-7-5 syllables), but, dealing with human rather than physical nature (birds, flowers, rain, water, etc), and Senryus are usually in an ironic or satirical vein. Example: Yesterday's regrets tomorrows apprehensions imprisons today By Melissa Honeybee I hope that this answers your question Take care, Melissa Honeybee P.S. - I am sure that you would be good at Senryus! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks melissa i'll have to try some of those senryus! sounds fun! dont have a lot of time with 2 yr old running around..but these are short and sweet...  "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- i like this alot. definitely different for you, but a great job. love ya, -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Well I think it was great..loved it. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
A short message but it made a big impact Lovely. Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This gave me a smile to warm a snowy October day in Maine. Thanks. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
TRICKS, VICTORIA, MARIA, K...thanks, all of you, for your replies..this was a rare nature venture for me glad you liked hugs, dg she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black |
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