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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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immersed in unreality suddenly only a kiss, but the first & all life still beating outside this pulse goes on without me [This message has been edited by allan (edited 05-26-2000).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Doesn't matter they are still feelings. Lovely poem btw  |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Lovely poem...I am moving it to The Corner Pub..so it can be appreciated by the other poets more fully... ~Heather |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Oh surprise! Thanks Heather!  btw I'm looking back a LONG way with this poem... [This message has been edited by allan (edited 05-26-2000).] |
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jenni Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 478Washington D.C. |
allan-- it doesn't matter how long you're looking back, it's still a beautiful look. very nice poem here! jenni |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've described it perfectly! Denise |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thanks all! (Being 50 I just didn't want y'all to think it had only just happened!) |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
allan, good poem and it accurately describes how I felt. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Special moment thats unforgettable, described in retrospect. Great job! Enjoyed! |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Few words to describe a powerful moment. And so accurate!! We don't often forget the first of anything. Very good Allan. [This message has been edited by childomine (edited 05-28-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow...the first kiss--i remember being so scared i'd do it wrong! haha! but you've described it so beautifully... "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
The memory of the first kiss is never lost you feel it forever even through the other ones breezeinnc |
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