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Wikket
Member

since 2000-01-29

Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA

0 posted 2000-01-30 10:39 AM

I finally achieved a daydream mood for this one...I just had to share it with my new friends down at 'The Corner Pub'!

Watching you from afar
I feel I know you
At nights, home from work
I gaze into your eyes
And imagine us together
The sunlight dipping into the Ocean
Holding you in my arms
Knowing you are mine
And I am yours

As we lay on the white sands
Cooling our bodies with the sharp chill
We drift into ecstasy
I kiss you tenderly
And you respond passionately
Our embrace almost strangling
As if we know our time here is short
So we make it count
I breathe you in
And the weight lifts

Of course, I wake up
And smile as you dissapear
Into your life again
And I into mine
Someday we will meet
But for now we will live
My Enchanted Dream

Exile
Junior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 42

1 posted 2000-01-30 12:19 PM

Wikket, you awaken such longing with this picture you've painted....believe me, you're not the only one looking for a relationship like this. I hope you find yours soon.

Exile

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-01-30 01:20 PM

very beautiful poem...lovely visions and imagery...we all dream of love like this...thanks for sharing it.Janet Marie

Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-30 02:41 PM

This is so beautiful! What lovely visions you painted!

Denise

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

4 posted 2000-01-30 03:36 PM

Dreams are great when they're as enchanted as this one. Very nice.

~Gene

Little_Spyro
Senior Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA

5 posted 2000-01-30 03:47 PM

This is wonderful...kind of like my own poem about dreams!

Very enchanting indeed!

Keep up the excellent work, Wikket!

Little Spyro T. Dragon

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

6 posted 2000-01-30 05:28 PM

Thank you for posting this one in the Pub....it's enchanting !

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

7 posted 2000-04-14 05:05 AM

*claps* I love this.. *rushes off to send it as a card to a well loved friend..*

MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

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