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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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two streamlined whizz gizmos horizontal flying screen shapes city spires glass metal shine faster arc... voooooooow! -ö- swooped out & swirled over arcing the arc way out jungle greens & sky blue and mountains grey & ragged rollercoaster bodyless way out wide exhileration sirens wailing ecstatic bliss heart beating round and round we go in pure clear no-time of being free, just me -ö- green cat woman inspects parade of dreamers eyes each one "Hey this one's awake!" dream ends. [This message has been edited by allan (edited 05-25-2000).] |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I felt that I needed to reply to this, it is wonderful, but I also keep saying the same thing over and over about different poems. I guess that I need to stay away for a while and think of some other words for wonderful and beautiful. I haven't posted a poem in SO long! NEWAYZ, Beautiful poem, allan. I love this! Alicia |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
thanks Alicia! (In real time even!)  I've just completed in between your post. Thank you and don't worry. These are very nice words to hear! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sound like exciting dreams, Allan! Denise |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Loved this! Felt like I was on a roller coaster; eyes wide, heart racing, holding my breathe - what an exciting trip!! |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Hello childomine! I'm really pleased you liked it. It was an awesome dream - so beautiful. It was easily the most beautiful, colourful and sensory I have ever had. Since you loved it here is the full description just for you... (And yet I could never describe exactly just how wonderful it felt...) I was on what I can only describe as something like a transparent "rollercoaster" running horizontally, but no seats, just me moving round in a huge arc, flying about a 500 feet up in the sky, soaring over a gorgeous rainforest and grey jagged peaks standing some way off in the distance. Incredibly colourful, as natural as I could imagine. Blue blue sky, bright sunshine, bright green foliage, sharp grey stone. The "coaster" is travelling very fast - at the peak of the bend the enormous thrust moves us all out as beings way out over the lush jungle, tumbling waterfalls and mountains - we are thrown out in a huge arc over all of this stuff. Not only is there the thrill of being above all of this wonderful scenery, it is also the very direct relationship you have with it - you are naked over it, spiritually present, but no body, no barriers between you and it. Not only that but the sheer excitement of each turn in the "track" - you are suddenly rushing out into the space above the jungle in a huge arc - you are above all this amazing scene and you come back in a long perfect arc as if you are connected by elastic though there is no tug - it is extremely smooth - you are out of your body, half a mile high, naked and flying, technicolour vision, thrilled and exhilerated, time after awesome time...  [This message has been edited by allan (edited 05-26-2000).] |
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