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Loveless.... |
Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
I am loveless, no one loves me. I love you, why can't you love me?? I love you, love me??? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad Denise |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Simple yet a very strong poem. I know exactly how this one feels. Just recently I have said this to a man. Sad thing is... I got no reply Nice work once again Dark_kisses I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Very strong indeed. I don't believe there is anyone who isn't loved but I too have been in the emotional place where I didn't think I was. [This message has been edited by childomine (edited 05-22-2000).] |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
sad very sad. no one should ever feel this way. not even me with a thoughtful, pondering soul has ever felt this sad before. touching P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I agree that this is sad, but I don't think anyone is loveless, sometimes we blind ourselves with negativity, when in reality what were searching for is right there. I hope you find that love and it carries you to happiness. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Sad but beautiful alicia |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Lonely poet~ A sad piece, short and to the point. I often feel this way, so unloved, unrequited love and rejection is very painful indeed, I feel your pain, but I promise that you will find your soulmate and be loved forever, keep smiling and have faith Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i think the hardest person to love is oneself...but necessary, in order to BE loved..i hope you find love--but look inside first... "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Thank you all for writing and taking the time to comment on my poem. This poem was written about a year ago whern the love of my life left. |
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