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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Daydreamer Empty voices, Echo around the room; I hear the words, But their meaning eludes me, For my mind is not here... I’m sitting in a field, Back against a maple tree, Threading daisy chains, In warm, summer sun. Sky above me, full of birds, Chattering amongst themselves. Pixie in a toadstool house, Hanging out her pixie clothes Waves a cheery greeting, As I tie daisies in my hair. A far off voice, calling my name. Glance up, sun shining, leaves twinkle, Disappear and teacher’s face, Impatient for an answer To an unheard question. "Umm, yes?" I guessed. "Good save" she said, And I knew she knew; For a minute, I was not here. Lynne |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Lynne,this is totally awesome!! I adore this poem. It's so.....dreamy and rather witty =] wonderful wonderful swampie And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Lynne,this is totally awesome!! I adore this poem. It's so.....dreamy and rather witty =] wonderful wonderful swampie And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Hehe, thanx swamp, thanx swamp. (lol, posted twice, *_^) glad u like it. ^_^ I wrote it in history, while doing a little daydreaming of my own.. *_^ Lynne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Delightful daydream! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
YuLan~ Ahhhhh ! My favorite place ... I often go to 'the meadow of my mind'. This is wonderful and takes me with you in an instant. Keep those daydreams alive. Serenity is found in the meadow. Good save, indeed ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
"pixie in a toadstool house" Great stuff. I really believe that Daydreaming is gift to keep us sane. Beautiful poem. Ellie 02 |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank uuu Denise, Marge.. yeah, hehe.. my favourite place too.. often more interesting than lessons.. *_^ Oh, to keep us sane? Now there's a thought! ^_^ Weeell.. not sure it has worked in my case, 'tho I sure do dream a lot.. =P woaw, pretty crazy myself.. lol.. joking. ^_^ thank u guys.. Lynne |
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