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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
I woke alone again today Doesn't matter anyway At all I took myself down to the bay Don't believe a word I say So long I can't believe that this is me I'm all I'll ever be At all Still there's something that I need Someone to set me free So long And I'm stuck within the beams Its tearing up my seams I'm gone Still sinking in these streams Lost somewhere deep in my dreams I'm gone I sleep alone again today I'm not tired anyway At all Need someone to set me free Keep me from leaving me But I'm gone |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
WHB, You did a great job capturing emotions with this one. So Sad. Someone will come along for the subject of this poem. Lovely written. marcy |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Thanks very much, and  I'm sure my someone is out there, thanks for the optimistic view! |
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patricianne Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 66 |
Hi WHB, I read all of your poems (so far), and really like your style. I will try to find the time to comment on each one. I'm new here too, finding it lots of fun. Keep writing!!  |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Thanks Patricianne, I'm glad you liked it. As far as "my style" goes you'll see with the other 5 or 6 I have floating around here that its really varied...I haven't settled into just one! Thank you again, as one Newbie to another! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, WHB! Denise |
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