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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
She said she had the answer I knew she didnt have a clue She spoke of times as long Since before that I met you Her eyes baked little circles The weather beat her face She sits alone at the dawn And stares off into space Autumn cries forever Cries to no avail Trembling hands and fever Sweatin' on skin so pale The night time comes on creepin And she says she has to go Onward through a darkened mist On barefoot in the snow Autumn cries forever She screams against the wind I know I have a purpose But I've got no hands to lend The breeze gently speaks now To the woman of the road Your burdens aren't for you now Please let me bear your load Autumn died and never Since with the seasons end Did know what of her meaning But she found a hand to lend |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
WHB, Nice poem, although I suggest that you don't post so many all at once, since it makes readers think that there are too many to read. Overall though, a big welcome from all of the members of the Pub =b! Good work here! Life defines no more than what it is you ask for. April 20, 2000 Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Thank you for the compliments, I'm so glad you liked the poem. Furthermore, my apologies for posting so many at once, I just joined here, and had poems to share that I thought would be enjoyed, I just wanted to get them up. I hope not everyone thinks that there are too many, there are only five! Thanks for your reply! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Bob! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Out of your many(  ) five thus posted i enjoyed this one most...this is my kinda poem...love it lots!! =]swampie And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Casonova Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 35Mays Landing |
I really enjoyed your poem, And the other four, thanks for posting them.. Welcome to the pub wobbly. I know you'll enjoy your stay Casonova |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this very much..sort of like an old fashioned folk song. Welcome to the family!  |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The Pub is a neat place for sure - I know you'll like it here, Wob... Can't help but see you wobblin' around here today... nice poem, btw..  |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
This is the first I've read, out of the ones everyone else is referring too, and I really like it. I look forward to reading more of your work.  I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
nice poem, very structured. I can see why you like structure so much. Made the poem so real and heartwarming that I had to read a second time before posting. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Oh no! You found out what I look like!!! I like this poem. Realistic, beginning to end. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
WHB, I just wanted to let you know that you don't get as many replies when you post a bunch all at once. Sorry, if you felt that I was being rude. I didn't mean to. Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Alicia, don't worry about it! *lol* People are responding and honestly I can't wait to post five more up here! Thank you again, I'm going to go look for your work, I'm a bit curious! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
bobbly wob...i think, upon arrival to the pub, i mayve posted too many myself... but, like you, i'm having a great time, and cant wait to post some more! have enjoyed reading your poems..would respond more but i'm one of few words on the spot..i like to savor a poem before i make much of a response take care--keep writing dgvarner |
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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
Nicely written first poem. Looking for may more from you Take care breezeinnc |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Bob, I knew there couldn't be two people with the same name writing poetry. Welcome to our family, great entry..... So couldn't you use like a splint or something to fix that wobble. Parker |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Oh now THIS is good.. ^_^ Nice writingzz.. welcome to da pub, ya wobbly poet.. *_^ I love the 6th stanza best.. Lynne |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Welcome to the Pub, WHB!! I think this is a really good poem. Furthermore, sorry for not saying welcome when you first got here...I haven't been to the pub for a while. I regret that of course. Well, I guess I'll go catch up on the rest of the poems in the pub now. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Thanks everyone so much for the praise!!! I really like this poem too, and it brings much joy to share it here and have it welcomed with such open arms! |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Look for some of my work, huh? Well, I suppose. Just find the good ones! LOL! Not that there are any posted here, or anywhere, or that even exist! LOL! Good luck! Alicia A. Renzelman |
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