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Oscillations |
Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Ocean waters swelling rise, Setting sun that's in his eyes, Watching waves with deep-down craves And golden evening skies... Shielded from the solar scorn, Soundly fast asleep and warm Waiting darkness comes to set On the sleeping form, and yet... Something from within is glowing, Casting beams of light it's throwing Into fast approaching night Removing color from all sight... As he sleeps, he gently moves In the sand he's making grooves, Sleeping, dreaming, soul is gleaming With oscillating moods... Covering body with his wings, Dreaming of some better things, Better places that to be Truly living, truly free; By the oscillating sea. Fortune has it when he woke There'd be in him for one swift stroke Return to places missed a lot, That place called home is what he sought. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ May he not forever roam, And someday find his one true home. ____________________________________________ This is one of those things I don't know where it came from...but it's there, and it doesn't make much sense to me...maybe it'll have a deeper meaning for you. Sorry I can't reply to anyone else's poetry (I had to conjure this one up pretty quick) but hope you like it and I'll be back as soon as I can! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Kitty_Fett Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 35 |
Hey Spyro, Nice work! There is a little bit of a connection to the story... . I like your work (I like the poet/author more though...)! Kitty Fett |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Hey Spyro, A very good poem. I'm pretty sure that the dragon will find a home soon... (I wish it was mine) |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Makes sense to me Dragon A VERY VERY nice piece of work ,pleasant to read. Jack |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hey, Sam! Missed ya! I loved this poem! Thanks for posting it! Hurry back! Denise |
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jaxjoy Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 112Texas |
I like the way the words flow like waves. This is a great piece! |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
This is wonderful Spyro, keep oscillating but don't go into orbit just yet Jon |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Nice flow Spyro ) May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
it makes sense to me too!! And i like it alot...it's beatiful and very serene. Swampola And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Makes perfect sense to me.. Once again, you've done wonderful. Looking forward to seeing more. I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Thanks everyone!! Well, my hopes echo those of Kitty, I really wish the lost one would find his way to MY home...lol So I'd have another of my own kind to hang around with! Hope to be truly back sooner than summer! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this feeling |
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