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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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aka/Black Lace ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hid my eyes Each time I smiled Veiled and trusted Though your heart Could have at any time Been obliterated by a no Or even by a yes. You made excuses when there weren't any And I listened because You remained intriguing. You left but you remained You left again but you still remain. While my eyes seek their haven Behind my arduous veils, I smile once in a while To fill myself with the mystery of you. And when you cross my mind, I cross my fingers In hopes that I don't go mad. Where are you Prince? I'm still dancing for you. Swirling my veils, Laces trailing, Shrouds wrapped, Voice silent, And eyes screaming from beneath their cover. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
This is very exotic and mysterious with it's veils and all. Sort of eastern in feel. I like it Jon |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
intense very intense. can feel the emotion coming though wonder what motivated you to write this. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is excellent, Temptress! Very nice! Denise |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I agree with epoet, very intense. Nice work! Alicia |
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Moonlight Romeo 
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I wonder if you've found him, for your eyes are no longer hidden. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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