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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere 
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Standing here.. Looking out to sea Forever I wonder, why, why me Now I wander...Never here Tomorrow comes...Without me there. Coldness creeps into my soul Eyes betraying that I'm old Far beyond my time I stand Heart longing for the distant lands Wishing upon stars for dreams Shaking in fear, mouthing silent screams Nothings wrong, nothings right Now I'll die with out a fight To oppose you is to deny the heart of friendship... To join you is to deny the heart of humanity. I am the earth... the fire... you are the sea and wind. Should we together be god? Or apart be nemesis... |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Oh .....Shivery feeling here. Nice piece of writing though. Jon |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
There is definetely pain in this poem. I enjoyed the read. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Agree with both the above.. **check your mail for my reply to this poem** ^_^ Lynne |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
I understand...I feel I was in the place you describe not too long ago. Beautiful Imagery and Emotion here!!! Great Work! I applaud you!!! ~~Jamie  "I keep breaking all the promises That I keep making to myself You'd think by now that I'd be over this Instead I'm feeling sorry for myself So why does everything seem desperate now? I should be feeling so alive But it feels like something's missing Something's wrong somehow It feels like something deep inside has died..." --Stabbing Westward |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely poem....I can feel the pain therein. It also made me tingle on the first read. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
pain and longing. I can relate to that. well written breezeinnc |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I've been there too. This is a very well expressed piece, BWA! Denise |
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