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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
DESOLATE HEART Oh my desolate heart Listen to what I say Do not oh do not stay Where you are not content Who will feel your pain Who do you cry with There is but no one for you In this foriegn land and its unknown people Oh my desolate heart Listen to what I say Do not oh do not stay Where you are not content Do not spread your arms for love They will give you nothing Do not lose sleep over it For they have nothing to give you. Oh my desolate heart Listen to what I say Do not oh do not stay Where you are not content breezeinnc |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Powerful poem here. Sometimes I believe we can control our own hearts better than we know. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Our hearts often betray us by insisting on staying where happiness can't be found. I read this as a forlorn plea to oneself. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful poem with much wisdom in the words. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
Thanks all You are a source of encouragement to me breezeinnc |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Beautiful poem. I will be watching for more by you. I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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