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kaile
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0 posted 2000-05-01 05:29 AM


Submissive child to his mum

Loudspeaker blares

*stares down*
*nods head*
*shrugs shoulders*
*clenches hands*
*pleading look*
*unmoving statue*

Absolute silence

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Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-05-01 08:43 AM


How unpleasant! A very good poem though.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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Denise
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2 posted 2000-05-01 11:48 AM


ah, this is so touching. The poor little guy.

Denise

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3 posted 2000-05-01 01:14 PM


Sad and lonely.

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
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4 posted 2001-12-04 02:50 PM


*sigh* You just described my childhood... hahaha... nah... I wouldn't have stood there when I was younger, I'd go from room to room hiding from mom's voice.  
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