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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA 
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(Spyro's Note: Just kinda imagine the "Ode to Joy" hymn playing along with this, okay?  )__________________________________________________ How do you write All those pieces Rhyming with such har-mony? Don't I wish that I could make that Great and won'drous po-etry! Words arranged so Thought pro-voking How I want to write that way-- Joy I wish that I could read some Of your writing ev'ry day! All the people Here at Passions Seem to like your works of art They are all right It's quite a sight And it's truly from the heart! Reading o-ver Boring? Ne-ver Patterns in your words to-day Streaming, flowing, Skill is growing And behind you all the way! __________________________________________________ (The music fades from the ears of all listening. The little purple dragon steps down from the conductor's stand and gently lays his baton on the velvet pad. The memory, the wand like magic, stirring up the orchestra, making the song rise up like a thousand graceful birds fluttering up into the night. And the audience was silent.) "Paintings and sculptures are art that comes from the hand, eye, and heart. Spoken and written verse comes from the mouth and heart. But music, the universal language, truly comes from the soul." --Luna Dragon, 'The Artisan's Gate' [This message has been edited by Little_Spyro (edited 01-28-2000).] |
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Exile Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 42 |
LS, that was great! Sometimes when I'm reading your work, I don't know whether to laugh or cry. The image of this crashing orchestra blasting out Beethoven, and a 20-member choir singing those words in four part harmony....and all of them being conducted as you described.... Wish I could see it live.... Exile |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
AHHH Spyro, sweet little puprle dragon, you are amazing this one is beautiful and SO imaginative and what a sweet tribute to Joy ..."She says baby, It's 3am I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it." Matchbox20 |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Bravo, Bravo. That was brilliant! I sang your poem in the style of Beethoven. You should put that up as a web page. A nice font with an attractive background and synthesised Ode to Joy playing.   |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
Child...you seem to always amaze with your works of art. One day when you're famous, we can say when knew him WHEN! This is wonderful! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Sam! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
ARGH ! Another wonderful poem from you little Dragon ! I'm starting to envy you for your talent !  |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Thank you so much Spyro! Your words brought me to tears! You are too kind! I enjoy your work so very much also. You have also, a great talent! Devotion The heart can think of no devotion Greater than being shore to the ocean- Holding the curve of one position, Counting an endless repetiton. -Robert Frost [This message has been edited by JOY 14 (edited 01-29-2000).] |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Sorry, I just noticed I used the word "much" quite a bit there in my reply. I couldn't help but laugh at myself. I just had to make note of that (in case anyone else noticed) !!!! Devotion The heart can think of no devotion Greater than being shore to the ocean- Holding the curve of one position, Counting an endless repetiton. -Robert Frost |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Oh, it's nothing, Joy...actually, it's about time somebody thought of doing that for you! lol |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
*claps* Beautiful... once again, I am amazed.. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is beautiful....really lovely. You have so much talent it is awe inspiring to read your poems. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
AHHHFKDVJOIFNE!! Little_Spyro!! No fair!! I'm green with envy ->  LOL....yer just to good!! I must admit the thought has crossed my mind that you're actually a older guy with a receding hairline who had his day in the poetry limelight and now wishing to me anonamous and unknow you're posting your poetry under an alias and false age.....LOL...ookie..well....mebe not eh??¿ And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
lol Swamp, I don't think I'm going to have a receding hairline until I'm about 40-something, or if I choose to get a buzz... I brought this to the top again because...well, call it a hunch (and hunches are easily proven wrong), but I think Joy needs some cheering up! I'm working on another poem for her right now, but just thought Joy should know any holes she may have can't get anywhere near her soul... Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Thank you Spyro. You have brightened my day and filled the holes in me with hope that time is passing so quickly, especialy here in the forums. It is so good to have you back. Joy |
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