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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
As i gaze upon you I see, a flowering rose, a poet's dreams, a moonlit sky, and feel a gentle breeze bringing your scent.. As I gaze upon you. As I gaze upon you I see, a dancing peacock, a deer in the woods, a silk thread, and i feel a gentle breeze bringing your scent.. as i gaze upon you. And like the subtle scent that the breeze brings I feel you My mind whispers "no" .. but my heart cries out "yes" Close Close to me. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful! Denise |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely! I wish someone would look at me and see what you describe!! Love and hugs, Lizzie ![]() "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Very Nice, Romantic ![]() Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
I agree, extremely romantic. I long for a person I can feel this way about... ~Jamie |
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