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latteaddict213
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0 posted 2006-02-20 04:18 PM



Valentines day you are so far away yet you have just passed by.You bring sweet memories that have fallen to the back of the mind, you bring them up to the front. And you take with you the bad
memories that made them fell hurt. You make us forget all the horrible things in life and remember the great ones

tell me some imput I'll be happy to hear all
                    
                   Jessica


Where your heart lays is where you belong.

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latteaddict213
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1 posted 2006-02-20 09:13 PM


Hello.. any one out there?
  i know the poem isn't great but i would like some feed back

      
         please
            Jessica
              


Where your heart lays is where you belong.

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2 posted 2006-03-07 05:26 AM


Love this line.....got me thinking:

"Valentines day you are so far away yet you have just passed by."

even if it don't make sence ... it does.... :P

x0x0
Free_Spirit07    
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~%#*So far from life and living!*#%~

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3 posted 2006-03-07 09:18 AM


thank you. i love hearing from you. its always a joy.

           Jessica    
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

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4 posted 2006-03-07 04:02 PM


I like the line that Free Spirit pointed out, too.

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

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5 posted 2006-03-07 05:24 PM


thank you

           Jessica    
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

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6 posted 2006-03-23 03:55 PM


mot bad but i kind of wish you would have made it a little longer, because it leaves you wanting more!!

every one is special in their own  way!!!

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7 posted 2006-06-27 11:28 AM


Oh. Well Thanks.
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