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latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

0 posted 2006-02-20 04:18 PM

Valentines day you are so far away yet you have just passed by.You bring sweet memories that have fallen to the back of the mind, you bring them up to the front. And you take with you the bad
memories that made them fell hurt. You make us forget all the horrible things in life and remember the great ones

tell me some imput I'll be happy to hear all

Jessica

Where your heart lays is where you belong.

[This message has been edited by latteaddict213 (02-20-2006 09:11 PM).]

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-02-20 09:13 PM

Hello.. any one out there?
  i know the poem isn't great but i would like some feed back


         please
            Jessica

Where your heart lays is where you belong.

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

2 posted 2006-03-07 05:26 AM

Love this line.....got me thinking:

"Valentines day you are so far away yet you have just passed by."

even if it don't make sence ... it does.... :P

x0x0
Free_Spirit07
~%#*So far from perfect!*#%~
~%#*So far from life and living!*#%~

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

3 posted 2006-03-07 09:18 AM

thank you. i love hearing from you. its always a joy.

           Jessica
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

4 posted 2006-03-07 04:02 PM

I like the line that Free Spirit pointed out, too.

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

5 posted 2006-03-07 05:24 PM

thank you

           Jessica
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

ShelbyLynn13
Member

since 2006-02-15

Posts 73
US, Colorodo

6 posted 2006-03-23 03:55 PM

mot bad but i kind of wish you would have made it a little longer, because it leaves you wanting more!!

every one is special in their own way!!!

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

7 posted 2006-06-27 11:28 AM

Oh. Well Thanks.

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