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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2005-02-13 01:20 PM



I bleed the words in ink obsidian
on a parchment thin with age
read with care the story tendered
upon this hallowed page

Are the words lessened if not read
though issued from my heart in pain
overlooked, these words lie fallow
deliverance with no spirit’s gain

The smile unseen, the tear not wiped
a hand’s need for a caress
bleed the words of love and pain
unread, invisible, in agony my distress.


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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
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1 posted 2005-02-13 11:48 PM



"Are the words lessened if not read
though issued from my heart in pain
overlooked, these words lie fallow
deliverance with no spirit’s gain"

A question I've asked myself on occasion Ms deVine.  You've written with a bleeding intensity that befits the holiday...  

Happy Valentine's Day Sharon...  

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2005-02-21 10:31 PM


Your words have been read and read with empathy.  Love, Joyce
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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3 posted 2007-10-08 01:48 PM


Valentines Day

is a very red time LOL

ARCTIC WIND

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