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Erin Gilchrist
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0 posted 2001-11-29 01:43 PM



The spirite of Christmas
is a star
wich shines upon the worled
and falls down
like a shoeting star
to toutch the children
of the worled
rite in there harts


by Erin

© Copyright 2001 Erin Gilchrist - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-11-29 02:14 PM



Welcome to Passions, Erin!

Erin Gilchrist
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2 posted 2001-11-29 02:19 PM


thank you Sunshine  
OLIAS
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3 posted 2001-12-04 09:53 PM


well done and beautifully written, welcome to Passions Erin I hope you enjoy your stay.

Regards,
Olias.

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4 posted 2001-12-06 12:22 PM


Erin~
Lovely sentiments to share~
WELCOME to Passions~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Justbleu
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5 posted 2001-12-08 06:32 PM


Quite sweet...I liked it!!!!  
Welcome to Passions Erin!!!!

Merry Christmas!!!!

Bridgette  

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6 posted 2001-12-13 11:59 AM


Dear Erin,
I loved the sentiment and imagery in this short poem. You might try a spell-check on it, as you had a lot of misspelled words, which made it a little hard for me to focus on your message.  

Nan

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