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paladin
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0 posted 2001-08-13 10:16 PM


Merry Xmas sing paper angels
on tinsel strings.
The saleman smiles as he sells
a toy gun to the war widow.
Buy this doll little girl
it wets,crys and sings.
Ah! the season of green back trees
and warm plastic snow.

paladin

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Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-08-19 12:17 PM


I sure hope it's still summer  
Love your poem anyway.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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2 posted 2001-08-22 01:22 PM


Great job on the poem!!! Very enjoyable!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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3 posted 2001-09-01 12:50 PM


Ho! Ho! Ho!
I liked it!
Plastic snow
guns to war widows
stinkin' babies

Not a really cheery poem but a truthful one

Glad that season doesn't come but once a year

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 09-01-2001).]

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2001-09-08 03:01 AM


Your poem has a lot of truth in it, but I know you aren't really that cynical.  You'll be singing Christmas Carols with the rest of us, come December.  Joyce
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