Wedding Vows, His Lines (Revised) and Wedding Vows 1 (revised)

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Miss Abagail Mannering
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since 1999-09-01

Posts 136
byron, il

0 posted 2001-02-02 10:59 AM

WEdding Vows 2 his lines

I Vow to stand by you
' for better or worse'
and whether or not
there's cash in the purse.

"In sickness and health"
young or old-
I pledge my love
with this band of gold. (he puts the ring on my hand here.)

Through PMS, Childbirth,
and all of those things...
I swear I will share
with these Wedding Rings.

I vow to love you
with all of my heart-
"to honor and cherish,
'til death do us part."

This is a Pre-Valentine/pre-wedding poem for my fiance'. these are his lines.
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WEdding Vows 1
(my lines)

With this ring, I thee wed. (I put his ring on)
More precious words have never been said.
Vows said today shall last forever.
For, we are each other's treasure.

At last, I found my froggy prince
after all of the pond scum...
I finally got my peice of cake,
instead of just the crumbs!

From this day forward, I am your wife.
I'll be yours the rest of my life.
So, take my hand," 'til death do us part,"
and know that I love you with every beat of my heart.

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2001-02-02 01:27 PM

Very sweet wedding vows. Congratulations to the both of you!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-02-02 11:59 PM

I'm loving it....great idea for poems

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2001-02-03 01:59 AM

Great vows and sharing of heart
until death do you part
Congrats
Hope
The ifs , buts
whys and somehows
me and mine still cherish our
wedding vows

Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

4 posted 2001-02-03 04:28 PM

Congrats! Think you would be willing to right mine for me*S*
*giggles*
Temptress*Moon

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-02-04 12:39 PM

Wow, very sweet here.
Congrats!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

6 posted 2001-02-04 10:20 PM

i think I would fall to my knees if someone ever wrote something like that for me. Beautiful words! Very sweet....

Jeremy

"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

Miss Abagail Mannering
Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 136
byron, il

7 posted 2001-02-06 10:52 AM

*blushes* thanks you guys...
Temptress moon, I'd be happy to try

Jeremy... off your knees boy, and get a tissue... that was a very sweet thing for you to say. *sniffles with a smile*
I wish my Finance' enjoyed the poems as much as y'all did!

"Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!"

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