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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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I built a snowman in the yard. It took a while, but it wasn't hard. I put a hat on his snow bald head. A pipe in his mouth and called him Ed. He stayed all night till just after dawn. The sun came out, and poor Ed was gone. Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lucie! This is so cute! I laughed and laughed! Poor old Ed! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
LOL....Loved this piece!  A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hillarious! This is great Lucie!  Denise |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Awww...poor Ed! This is cute, thanks for the May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
LOL, cute! No snow yet, but that will be coming soon enough. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hahaha hey this was great!!!! I loved it!!!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lucie~ Cute little piece  Poor ED  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
hehe, I love it, great job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Lucie, to tell ya the truth this happened to me last year we had a snow fall in morn by 1:00pm sun came out warmed things up and like you said in rhyme lil ole Ed tumbled to the ground... I liked your poem and Oh how I miss the snow! Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-04-2000).] |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
When I pulled up my E-mail and saw the notifications from Netpoets I was a little surprised.. I haven't written a poem in so long I sometimes think all the poems I did churn out where a figment of my imagination, but then isn't that where all poems come from. Thank you all for your comments on this piece. And thanks for making an old poet feel special about something she wrote.Lucie |
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Flutterbutt New Member
since 2008-12-06
Posts 2 |
Hey mom!! You know I always liked this poem! =) I hope i'll be as good as you...  |
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