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0 posted 1999-12-07 12:51 PM

I built a snowman in the yard.
It took a while, but it wasn't hard.
I put a hat on his snow bald head.
A pipe in his mouth and called him Ed.
He stayed all night till just after dawn.
The sun came out, and poor Ed was gone.

 Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul.

© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-12-07 01:13 AM

Lucie! This is so cute! I laughed and laughed! Poor old Ed!  
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2 posted 1999-12-07 07:47 PM

LOL....Loved this piece!  

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

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3 posted 1999-12-07 09:01 PM

Hillarious! This is great Lucie!  


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4 posted 1999-12-08 12:34 PM

Awww...poor Ed!     This is cute, thanks for the  

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

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5 posted 2000-11-04 02:39 PM

LOL, cute! No snow yet, but that will be coming soon enough.


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.

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6 posted 2000-11-04 02:54 PM

Hahaha hey this was great!!!! I loved it!!!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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7 posted 2000-11-04 05:52 PM

Cute little piece  
Poor ED  

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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8 posted 2000-11-04 06:22 PM

hehe, I love it, great job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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9 posted 2000-11-04 08:55 PM

Lucie, to tell ya the truth this happened to me last year we had a snow fall in morn by 1:00pm sun came out warmed things up and like you said in rhyme lil ole Ed tumbled to the ground...

I liked your poem and Oh how I miss the snow!

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-04-2000).]

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10 posted 2000-11-11 04:57 PM

When I pulled up my E-mail and saw the notifications from Netpoets I was a little surprised.. I haven't written a poem in so long I sometimes think all the poems I did churn out where a figment of my imagination, but then isn't that where all poems come from.   Thank you all for your comments on this piece. And thanks for making an old poet feel special about something she wrote.


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11 posted 2008-12-06 12:26 PM

Hey mom!! You know I always liked this poem! =) I hope i'll be as good as you...
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