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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-11-18 07:37 AM


In deep reds and greens,
Hoilday spirit touches around us,
Along with tinsel dust.


Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-11-18 12:28 PM


A nice holiday-cheer haiku, Maria!

Elizabeth

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2 posted 2000-11-18 02:03 PM


Very nice!
Moon Dust
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3 posted 2000-11-19 09:07 AM


Thank u for youer kind words

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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4 posted 2000-11-19 09:41 AM


Love it!!! Tinsel dust....it's wonderful.  Bonnie
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5 posted 2000-11-20 07:02 AM


Oh lovely Maria  

so a Senryu is 5-10-5?

enjoyed it
Maree

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this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

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6 posted 2000-11-20 02:03 PM


a senyru lesson very nice yuh
Moon Dust
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7 posted 2000-11-23 02:42 PM


Maree - oooops got a bit carried away on this one

wayoutwalt - yup

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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8 posted 2000-11-24 04:08 PM


A great holiday senryu!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Moon Dust
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9 posted 2000-11-24 07:24 PM


Yep, just had to do one for christmas

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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10 posted 2000-11-28 04:51 AM


im glad you did cos you summed up Christmas perfectly
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11 posted 2000-11-29 03:53 PM


ta very much

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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12 posted 2000-11-30 08:39 AM


Great holiday Senryu!
Deb

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13 posted 2008-10-26 12:06 PM


Ya gotta love the Holidays! I LOVE christmas!


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