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My Thanksgiving Poem |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This my Thanksgiving poem is just a simple little thing, when we carve the turkey you can give the dog a wing. But first there must be the smells that will fill the house but when the yams catch afire a pan of water surely should douse. And when the turkey falls apart just put it on the plate, it won't matter anyhow it still gonna get ate. When you eat the pumpkin pie save a piece for me, I baked it so I expect later a piece there'd better be. I'll do the dishes later I'll be to stuffed to do them now, would someone please explain to me where all that food goes and how. But before we touch this food there was something I almost forgot to say we are grateful for the gifts from above so let's thank the Lord and pray. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a lovely poem!!! Even the fire....I don't like yams but I love the stuffing! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
GS~ This is such a fantastic read, you have done well with the images you made come to mind and the ending was so fitting...great work Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I liked this a lot, Gentle Spirit. It was cute and the last two lines are great. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I gotta agree with DeVineeeeeeeeee...although she copied this from me..........stuffing is the best!!!! Wonderful poem! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I love the turkey when it is falling apart! YUM! As for the dishes how about Chinette? Just throw it all away after dinner. Then you only have to wash the pots, pans and utensils! Cute poem! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ I just e-mailed my son the shopping list. At least that much gets done. Now let me in the kitchen cause that's where I have my fun ! And this year, not one but TWO new daughters-in-law, thank you. Two new precious family angels, the dishes they will gladly do. I'm thankful for the very fact that this family gathers together ... Blessings bestowed in bountiful joy in the beautiful Florida weather ! *Thanks for sharing this adorable inspiring write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is good, I like it, it reminds me of the chaos in the kitchen at this time of the year. Nicely done "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Happy Thanksgiving! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Another bump up to the top for Thanksgiving 2001. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I thank you all, and this year, knowing you all more than I did last year I can only say that I have been blessed with all that you all have given me in so many ways I can never count them......or repay them. God bless you all and be with your families and loved ones this year. Hugs to all and love Donna On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
HAPPY THANKSGIVING DONNA!! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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