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Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 2000-11-06 09:01 PM

                The wee'est elf,
                To all did say,
                It's Friday night,
                Come on, let's play.

                We've toiled all week,
                We've earned our keep,
                Let's have some fun,
                Before we sleep.

                We'll boogie hard;
                Shake our booties,
                Forget about,
                Our North Pole duties.

                I'll tell you what,
                We'll kareoke,
                Wee elf asked all,
                Okie Dokie?

                Rudolph yelled,
                Let's party down,
                'Cause Santa Claus,
                Has went to town.

                The toy shop shook,
                As out came Prancer,
                To sing a song,
                With stall-mate Dancer.

                "I've Got You Babe."
                To the letter,
                Sonny and Cher,
                Could do no better.

                But then a hush,
                Fell on shop floor,
                As Santa Claus,
                Walked through the door.

                All elves and reindeer,
                Held their breath,
                With visions of,
                Impending death.

                Who's in charge,
                Of this fiasco?
                You've turned toy shop,
                Into a disco!!!

                Wee elf replied,
                It was me sir,
                Your wrath and ire,
                I will incur.

                Santa beckoned,
                Come here wee elf,
                And placed wee smirf,
                Upon top shelf.

                As wee elf quaked,
                In wee elf fear,
                Said Santa Claus,
                All listen hear.

                He then commenced,
                Gyrating hips,
                "Blue Suede Shoes,"
                From forth his lips.

                Elves and reindeer,
                Dropped their jaws,
                As they all stared,
                At Santa Claus.

                The party roared,
                All through the night,
                It lasted til,
                The dawn's first light.

                When to wee bed,
                Wee elf then crept,
                With wee elf smile,
                Wee elf then slept.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-11-07 12:32 PM

A wonderful ending. I love how this whole poem flowed. Quite nicely penned!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

2 posted 2000-11-07 01:10 PM

I loved this! I could see the disco in my mind's eye...well done!

Elizabeth

You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

3 posted 2000-11-07 05:25 PM

lol, got on them blue suede shoes, a real hoot that wee little elf!
Deb

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-12-13 12:38 PM

Mike~
*giggling* with the boogie-beat~
Happy Holidays to you my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

5 posted 2001-12-14 07:41 AM

The Wee Elf tales are a great part of the Christmas spirit. Thanks.

Melton

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2001-12-14 04:59 PM

Dear Mike,
I loved it. I knew Santa could boogey down!

Nan

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 2001-12-16 09:33 PM

Simply charming, Mike! I love all the wee elf stories!

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

8 posted 2001-12-16 11:23 PM

liked this original boogie rendition and it's neat flow.

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

9 posted 2001-12-21 10:04 PM

Thanks for the smile from this wee gem.

Regards,
Olias.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2007-12-20 10:59 AM

ing some Christmas cheer~

Wee wittle elf is SUCH A JOY~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

11 posted 2007-12-20 12:22 PM

I love it! I can see the fat man singing.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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