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mirjam Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246Auckland, New Zealand |
I am fruit rotting on the fruitscale mould-coated, malleable, discarded [eventually thrown away] (in the fire) I am a wineskin burst: hollow, liquid evicted - licked up [the world drunk on my evaporation] I am a banana bent: weighted, longing to peel away [the load] I am the pit of a plum naked: eaten around the edges, spat out, grinded in the blade of a waste-disposal unit [longing to be whole and clothed once more] I am an apple cut and peeled: coreless, all flesh and browning pulp waiting [to be consumed] I am fruit[less] on a fruitscale: but attatched to the vine I am fecund, fearless, [and bound to beat the frost when winter comes.] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Interesting way to put it! Long as were attached to the "vine" we will turn out fine! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Great ending. Indeed, you will prevail when the time of trials arrives. Good poem. michael |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Great job! Very well put! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes indeedie!  ------------------ Denise |
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