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Tramp Poet
Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2000-05-07 01:02 PM


Revisited Again

The call came again
haunting, almost imperceptible.  
Was I sleeping, or dreaming
seems my eyes were wide open.  

It's a song, maybe not
perhaps just a phantom.  
A perception, nay a feeling
subconscious, even lower.  

Like a ghostly memory
not really a memory at all.
Awakening with fading dreams
that become quickly forgotten.  

Not sure, even if ever
the experience happened.  
Was it a voice, a scream
or a correcting whisper?

Perhaps, the voice of God
speaking reality into existence.  
Perhaps, just poetic madness
a call no others may hear.

Tell me friend, do you hear it
soft whispers beneath the waves?
Do you awakened with almost voices
can you hear, believe that you hear?



  bleeding...

"Tis ink coming from his arm,
Captain!"



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Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
1 posted 2000-05-07 02:03 PM


Welcome bleeding, my brother, my friend. Jesus got you by the toe, nay, He will not let you go! He loves you and you serve Him, glad to see your witness again! Love ya,marcy
sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
2 posted 2000-05-07 11:16 PM


It's great to even consider God may be speaking to us through our dreams. That says He's our first thought when we awake.  Nice verse.
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 2000-05-08 12:50 PM


Welcome Bleeding!  It does state that God speaks to us in dreams, he has done it, it's biblical...

It may very well be just that  

I hope we get to see more from you!

 <*\\\><

Our background and circumstances may have influenced who we are, but we are responsible for who we become.


Jonas
Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon
4 posted 2000-05-08 09:50 PM


Take it from someone that has not only heard's God's voice, but was given a vision as well, He does indeed speak to us in our dreams. His voice can be heard in every facet of life, if we listen. Beautifully written poem and God Bless!
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