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Forrest Cain
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since 2000-04-21
Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA

0 posted 2000-04-28 11:40 PM


Gods Truth

Gods truth my friend
it dwells within
written on our hearts
your  truths
my truths
these lies my friend
are what keep us
apart.


© Copyright 2000 O. Forrest Cain - All Rights Reserved
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
1 posted 2000-04-29 04:54 AM


Forrest,
Your poem is simple , but sublime!
But you have said a mouthful. In so many ways God's Truth , and wisdom from above, has been suplanted by the wisdom(?) of the world--which, James says in Chapter 3 is earthly, sensual & devilish.  When will we learn--Substitution is but Spiritual Execution!
  Thanks for the reminder,  David  


 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-04-29 06:12 AM


"and the truth shall set us free"! The simple truth of your poem is perfection. Beautiful! Ellie

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Jester59701
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 154

3 posted 2000-04-29 12:42 PM


WoW! Forest,
   Your poem speaks volumes. Really cuts to the quick. Thank-you
              Jester

 

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
4 posted 2000-04-29 01:26 PM


Forrest, I loved your lines,"it dwells within
         written on our hearts".
Love it! Thanks, Marcy

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
5 posted 2000-04-29 05:48 PM


Forrest - So few words, but such powerful truths.  Wonderful!!!  Bonnie
son of man
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since 2000-04-25
Posts 125

6 posted 2000-04-29 08:19 PM


dynamite comes in small packages!
wisdom comes in few words.
great work!

 

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
7 posted 2000-04-30 09:38 AM


AMEN! May his truth reside in us all. Such a wonderful verse.
Sincerely,
Rwood

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
8 posted 2000-05-01 10:19 PM


Short and sweet? na, maybe powerful would describe this better! It certainly got the true point across! Excellent!

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Our background and circumstances may have influenced who we are, but we are responsible for who we become.


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