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BSC
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0 posted 2000-04-14 10:05 PM


As I sat on the dock this morning,
Watching the sun rise over the hill,
With baby ducks gliding gracefully,
I could feel my spirit fill.
Enveloped in the mist of the morning,
A fresh shimmer of dew on the grass,
Rays of brilliant sunlight shone
As if through a prism of glass.
Clouds that looked like cotton,
Blinding white as the purest snow,
Against a sky of the deepest blue,
Oh, what a glorious show.
On the water there was barely a ripple,
Rugged trees still, as if standing guard,
It seemed a small glimpse of heaven,
Right here in my own backyard.
I could envision the golden pathways,
Smell the lavender lining each side,
I could feel the carpet of violets,
That cushioned my every stride.
Ivory doves and dandelion fluff,
Weightlessly danced in the air,
While running through fields of wildflowers,
Were wee cherubs with dark curly hair.
I came out to watch the sunrise,
As I was troubled through the night,
Lord, at once You took my burdens,
Again filling my soul with Your light.
I'm in awe at how every moment,
Whether it's happiness felt, or pain,
Your presence is always with me,
I need only to call out Your name.






[This message has been edited by BSC (edited 04-15-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-04-14 10:36 PM


BSC~
This is truly upliftingly lovely.

'I came out to watch the sunrise,
As I was troubled through the night,
Lord, at once You took my burdens,
Again filling my soul with Your light.'

How I love to meet my Lord on the
dawning rays of a new day.
Thank you for this moment.
~*Marge*~



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Songbird
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2 posted 2000-04-14 11:30 PM


This is really beautiful,God so often speaks to us through the beauty of nature. He made such a beautiful world  for us to enjoy.

[This message has been edited by Septsong (edited 04-14-2000).]

ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2000-04-15 03:06 AM


Dear Bonnie: I feel like I'm sitting on that dock with you! Maybe someday I'll get to!
This is a beautiful and uplifting poem. I can smell the lilacs too. You are gifted, dear friend. love, ellie

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WhtDove
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4 posted 2000-04-15 10:55 AM


Bonnie you have such a descriptive way of describing things, you put the reader right there with you. This was breathtakingly beautiful!!!

What a comfort knowing that he's always there no matter in joy or pain. Such a serene, peaceful setting you describe.

Alle'cram
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5 posted 2000-04-16 03:29 AM


Bonnie,
This poem left me in awe! Simple breathtaking.  I love it. With humility you
faced the morning from distress within the night, only to find God's favor as it swelled
within your soul, in focusing on Him, our creator. This one really speaks to me. Marcy

BSC
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6 posted 2000-04-16 05:53 PM


Thanks for all of your kind replies.  I appreciate so much that you have read these, and Ellie....maybe someday we will sit together on that dock!!!   Bonnie
ellie LeJeune
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7 posted 2000-04-16 05:55 PM


Bonnie, lets make that a promise we'll keep!

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rwood
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8 posted 2000-04-16 09:25 PM


Dearest Bonnie. What enlightenment! So descriptive and dreamy. I'm so glad your dark hours came to rest in this beautiful poem. A beautiful day to cherrish! Thank you so much for being you!
Sincerely,
Rwood

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9 posted 2000-04-16 09:45 PM


it made me want to kick off my shoes and splash in the water, and made me feel like a little girl in summer. I loved it!

 Kathleen


deleeme
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10 posted 2000-04-16 10:52 PM


Bonnie, this is abeautifully descriptive piece that just draws the reader into the experiences which you are describing. what a wonderful ability you have in your use of words.  God bless you, more & more,  David

 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



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