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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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“The Kingdom Of God is inside you, and all around you…” Purity in form of the snow-white dove- Innocence in eyes of a doubtless child, Consideration in outstretched palm- Wisdom in the unwavering mind… “I’m not in a house made of wood nor stone…” No building of grandness or rubble- Will ever influence the heart of God. Walls cannot create, nor dictate- The pureness of your believing soul… “Split a piece of wood, and I’ll be there…” That aching wound begging release- On bending knee…believe in me. An open heart will reprimand- Of fallen strength, and fallen man… “Lift a stone, and there you’ll find me…” Awaiting patiently, Timelessly- Forgiveness…you shall see. Come raw and open to me- No longer shall you grieve… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ This is inspiring. Lovely thoughts, lovely feelings. There is a serenity in you that is refreshing to see.  KARMA Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well hun, you certainly bring justice to the unjustified passage. Your last stanza speaks very loudly, here. I know how much this piece meant to you - and I think you've done wonderful with it. Indeed, "Walls cannot create, nor dictate." Michael |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Devina...this is wonderfully creative |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This is fantastic! I love it, I love it. Please if you would, when this falls to back pages, have Michael move into spiritual. I'd very much appreciate it, if you'd share with them also. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Purity in form of the snow-white dove- Innocence in eyes of a doubtless child, Consideration in outstretched palm- Wisdom in the unwavering mind… --------------- “Split a piece of wood, and I’ll be there…” That aching wound begging release- On bending knee…believe in me. An open heart will reprimand- Of fallen strength, and fallen man… “Lift a stone, and there you’ll find me…” Awaiting patiently, Timelessly- Forgiveness…you shall see. Come raw and open to me- No longer shall you grieve… ---------------------- devina...girl this is AWESOME... this is SO perfect. WOW...it just glows... this is one you should be real proud of!! take care, jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Beautifully written, and in the spirit of the approaching season. Shows another demension of your incredible writing talent. May have penned a masterpiece here, it touches the heart, mind, and soul. "Forgiveness...you shall see Come raw and open to me" DH |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Rebecca and I thought this was a wonderful poem with some thought provoking referance to the "unjustified passage". We both felt it should be shared her in Spiritual so it has been moved here from open. Michael |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Thank you Rebecca & Michael for choosung to bring this worthy work to our forum as well. Devina, Your words are so hauntingly perceptive, your manner of presentation is bold and full of conviction. You present a menagerie of thougths well bound together by the title,Unjustified Passage. Thank for the introspective meditation. David< !signature--> "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- [This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 04-09-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I love the beauty of this poem! I just saw "Stigmata" last night and I see it touched you the way it did me. Awesome movie. You have written a most lovely poem. thank you. Ellie 02 |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
the quotes are killer and the poem is more killer can i say that in spiritual (bad joke) anyhow it really made me think |
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Stephen Jones Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 53 |
The poetry here flowed with delicate majesty! The writing itself was grand and worthy of the subject matter: The Kingdom of God. Rarely do we find both combined as a double edged sword. We admire one or the other when we see them, either piousity or poetry. But when they are both genuine and become one flesh, look out! I especially liked the part about buildings of stone not moving God, for he dwells in temple made without hands. Look forward to more and perhaps your thoughts on some of my poetry soon. Thanks! |
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