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MelBear
Junior Member

since 2000-03-26

Posts 29
Imlay City, Mi

0 posted 2000-03-28 06:34 PM

Hey everyone.. I thought it would be fun to see how we could all make a poem.. so add a line or two and lets see what we get!
Mel
(MelBear)
If you look into my eyes you see pain.
If you look into my chest you see heart that no one can tame.

(ellie LeJeune)
My eyes long to see again
and know someone cares
and knows my name.

(Septsong)
I keeping waiting for one
Who's curious enought to care
What treasures's I have

(erieval)
You see a heart that's wild and free,
no chains can bind if God holds the key

(rwood)
magically open
to the war of the worlds
Fearing not, to love

(BSC)
Shimmering tears released
unchaining me
freeing the unwanted pain

(Dennis L. White)
My spitit sees
The Rainbow of
Unconditional Love
A promise,
Obtainable,
Mine to claim
(deleeme)
O Lord please see my eyes of pain-
And O'er my heart may you e'er reign.

(Alle'cram )
As I take these burdens to the cross,

(KimW)
And rest my head to pray
All my burdens will be lifted
Faith will find it's way
Love will be woven
gently within my heart.

[This message has been edited by MelBear (edited 04-04-2000).]

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2000-03-28 06:39 PM

My eyes long to see again
and know someone cares
and knows my name.

02

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

2 posted 2000-03-28 10:35 PM

I keep waiting for one
Who's curious enough to care
What treasures's I have

[This message has been edited by Septsong (edited 04-03-2000).]

erieval
Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 56
northeasten pa.

3 posted 2000-03-28 11:02 PM

You see a heart that's wild and free,
no chains can bind if God holds the key.

MelBear
Junior Member

since 2000-03-26

Posts 29
Imlay City, Mi

4 posted 2000-03-28 11:37 PM

wonderful you guys!!!! Keep it comming!
MELBEAR

"Death is not the end. Just a vaction (where you acan still see the world)from friends and family, in time they all follow you to your permanet vacation spot."

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2000-03-30 08:54 PM

magically open
to the war of the worlds
Fearing not, to love

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

6 posted 2000-03-30 09:39 PM

Shimmering tears released
unchaining me
freeing the unwanted pain

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

7 posted 2000-03-31 02:10 PM

My spitit sees
The Rainbow of
Unconditional Love

A promise,
Obtainable,
Mine to claim

(sorry MelBear I got carried away)

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

8 posted 2000-04-01 07:26 PM

O Lord please see my eyes of pain-
And O'er my heart may you e'er reign.

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

9 posted 2000-04-01 08:24 PM

As I take these burdens to the cross,

KimW
Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA

10 posted 2000-04-02 12:16 PM

And rest my head to pray
All my burdens will be lifted
Faith will find it's way
Love will be woven
gently within my heart

Not sure where this will fit in..

Kim

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

11 posted 2000-04-05 04:20 PM

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