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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 2000-03-27 06:43 PM


My Guardian Angel I've never seen
At least I don't recall,
Perhaps I knew him at one time
When I was very small.
I'm sure we played together
When his voice I could hear,
That made me a happy baby
"So cute, and full of cheer!"
When I still spoke the native tongue
That God's little angels e'er keep,
'Fore Mom and Dad went and spoilt it--
By teaching me "how to speak!"

So any description that I can give
On my imagination must rely,
So this is more how I'd like him to be--
He must be a TERRIFIC guy!
This little feller I'll call Jim
(In Heav'n last names don't fly),
Unless you're John T. Baptist--
Why that's so? Don't ask me why!
And tho' Jim is a wee one
No cherub is he, I knows,
For Guardian Angels come fully equipped--
(And that includes their clothes!)

Jim's dressed for all occasions
A little Derby is his crown
(Tied with string under his chin)
Over which his halo's found!
And yes, Ellie, he wears Sneakers
For he always stays on call.
So that if I ever need him
He's there in no time at all!
He carries a Rainbow umbrella
When tough storms of life I'm finding,
Reminding me that not all are bad--
To look for the "silver lining!"

On his knees, he wears knee pads
Tho' clouds I've been told, are quite soft,
To encourage me oft' to kneel in prayer--
Send requests up to heaven's loft.
And though I can't now see him
He's helped me many times, as I've said.
For if I had not been protected
Many times I could have been dead!
When it comes to Guardian Angels
And seeking a rating for them,
I'd say of mine, resolutely--
I think that my JIM's a GEM!!!



 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



© Copyright 2000 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-03-27 06:59 PM


David; This is a winner and I had a nice chuckle. "sneakers" haha! I love the lightness and the whimsy. Won't it be interesting when we get to heaven and find out how much our angels did for us? I think we'll be shocked. Great job on answering the challenge! Ellie

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-03-27 07:51 PM


LOL David! This was humorous. I enjoyed this, and got quite the laugh out of those sneakers too! Great poem David, and thanks for the uplift!
Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
3 posted 2000-03-27 08:06 PM


Hi David,
  I REALLY liked this one. Chipper and fun to read, with his little sneakers and all.
God Bless You and Little Jim
Marcy

Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
4 posted 2000-03-28 08:22 AM


So cute ...  
I smiled throughout ....
Enjoyed this piece much, David ...

erieval
Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 56
northeasten pa.
5 posted 2000-03-28 08:57 AM



Dear David,
Wonderful, amusing, discription of your guardian angel. I just loved this poem. I truely believe in guardian angels and beleive that I saw mine when I was about six years old.
May JIM be watching over always.
Bless you,
Erie

 "The grace of the Lord be with you all."
- Rev. 22:16
"Oh that I had wings like a dove! For then I would fly away and be at rest."
- Psalm 55:6
Erie

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-03-28 11:45 AM


This is so cute, David!

Denise

Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
7 posted 2000-03-29 06:40 PM


so you are david!!! ok now ellie's poem has a name and a face!  i love the response!    you must keep your guardian angel on his toes!     it's good exercise!    cute poem!
rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
8 posted 2000-03-30 07:01 AM


Wonderfull David. This is a special treat. Jim is a Gem. I'm so glad that you shared this whimsical and delightfull piece. I think Jim is dancing a jig right now. So special he is and you are.
Sincerely,
Rwood

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