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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Sitting alone on a cresent moon, Dipping her toes in the stars, This tiny little angel, Nibbling on chocolate bars. Perched on the edge with her fishing pole, What can she catch in the sky? Perhaps a little cherub, Who's just learning how to fly. From a star another is swinging, His wings brushing to and fro, Wiggling his feathers and pumping his legs, This swing just goes too slow!! What is that over there? On the tail of a comet they ride, It's two more little angels, Playing on heaven's slide. The sweet sound of children laughing, So happy, yet not very loud, A group of tiny cherubs, Tumbling about on a fluffy white cloud. Feathers floating everywhere, Tiny halos askew on their heads, Full of vim and vigor, With nary a thought of their beds. These precious protectors of the night Have caught me quite off guard, As they frolic through the heavens Safely in God's backyard. [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 03-24-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dearest Bonnie;WOW! I love this poem! Apsolutely adorable! I can see all those little sweet Angels romping and the flow and the wording so lovely. This one is my all time favorite of yours! Do you mind if I print it out for my grand daughter? Thanks for this lovely gem, Love, Ellie 02 |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
such a beautiful picture of children! they are angels, aren't they? i especially liked the part about the tumble in the clouds and halos askew ![]() |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Bonnie, this is so pretty. The thought of children playing in the heavens is so endearing to me. I adore this poem. It's the most playful and innocent piece I've ever read. God's backyard! This is great! Sincerely, Rwood |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ellie - Thanks you for your kind words they mean a lot to me. I am honored that you would like to print this... Please do. Aiden - Ah, the little children, aren't they what this life's about. Regina - Thanks so much for your encouraging words...they are so very much appreciated. [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 03-24-2000).] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Go Girl! You did it, maybe one of my favorites. God Bless, Marcy |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Marcy - Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it. |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
This is so adoreable and special! ![]() I really LOVE this one!! God bless you and yours.. Kim |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a delightful poem! Excellent! I'd love to see this on a greeting card or something... very good... love it! ![]() |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This poem is so special! It's tender, and fun, and imaginative, and just WOW! It's awesome! A+ I love it! |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Bonnie, You've captured innocent joys in a heavenly way, making as it were a bright spot in my day. Thank you, I am gald to be a partaker of your lovely wares. God Bless you, David "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Thank you all for reading this, I really do appreciate it. Bonnie |
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