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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-03-07 07:43 AM


Once upon a time, in a faraway land,
deep in the forest, lived a little fairy.
Every morning she would wash in the brook,
     and dry her gossamer wings,
      in the beams of the sun.
    The rest of her day was spent
   gathering food in a beautiful glen.
   But, deep inside, the little fairy
           was unhappy.
She felt an emptiness that nothing
            would fill.
In her time spent with all the other
              fairies,
There were millions, hidden deep
          in the forest,
she learned that they, also, felt the
             emptiness.
One day, while gathering in the
          beautiful glen,
        She had a question.
Where did all this beauty come from?
Who could have created all this wonder?
   She told all the other fairies,
and they gathered to wonder at this, too.
Then a still small Voice came on a breeze,
                I AM!
         Their spirits soared!
          The emptiness fled,
  as  the Truth entered their hearts.
    All responded on bended knee,
      to serve the One True God.
   This was the beginning of Angels!

              
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
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1 posted 2000-03-07 09:06 AM


Dear Ellie - What a beautiful story, I could see the little fairies so clearly, you just painted such a warm picture with your words. Thank you and thank you for your kind replies, it means a lot.   Bonnie
Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-03-07 12:49 PM


Ellie, What a iminaginative story. I love it.
When we hear truth, as the fairies did, it fills our life with new meaning. Full of hope. Also, thank you for your kind replies and helpful advice. Marcy

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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3 posted 2000-03-07 05:30 PM


Only from the mind of ELLIE, could we have such a delightsome fairy tale, with an inspiring truth attached.  It was both entertaining and inspiring. Thank you for working your magic touch with your pen(or keyboard) and enchanting us with this worthwhile message!  Your dear friend, David

 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2000-03-08 07:50 AM


Dear Bonnie, Alle and David; Thank you so much for your  Lovely comments and encouragement. Love, Ellie  p.s. this one was fun to write!

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
5 posted 2000-03-08 10:49 AM


Ellie this was a great story! I love it. Precious!
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-03-08 02:40 PM


Ellie,
this is precious and perfect. such  wonderful images your created in my mind with this one...very lovely.thank you.
janet marie

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