Dancing In Dreams (Inspired by Ellie)

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BSC

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0 posted 2000-03-01 09:11 AM

In dreams I am dancing with the Lord,
It's a slow and glorious waltz -
I'm waking as the devil cuts in,
His two-step praising my faults.

A twist of uncontrolled movement,
And I begin to doubt my own feet-
Until I call for the Lord to come,
And bring back the dance so sweet.

I get lost in the soft, soothing melody,
As we glide to the dear angels song,
That's when He shows His love for me,
And proves the devil so wrong.

Heavens canopy is our ballroom,
Twinkling stars - our only light,
Doves and angels surrounding us,
As I fall gently to sleep for the night.

ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2000-03-01 09:17 AM

Dear bsc; I am so profoundly honored and humbled that I inspired you. You have written a beautiful poem. It positively sings with the sound of Angels voices. You have a wonderful gift. Thank you so much, Ellie {wow!}

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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

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2 posted 2000-03-01 09:45 AM

Very lovely, music to my ears!

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

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3 posted 2000-03-01 10:28 AM

WOW! This is fabulous! I love it, what an inspiration you got!

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28

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4 posted 2000-03-01 11:38 AM

I love it!!
Just like ole Satan to cut in while dancing with the Lord. A beautiful message as Jesus takes back control.

Alle'

ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2000-03-01 09:34 PM

Dear Bonnie; I just have to tell you that you made my day! All my love, Ellie

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rwood
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since 2000-02-29

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6 posted 2000-03-01 10:02 PM

How beautiful! Spiritually soothing and true.
Thank you!
Sincerely Rwood

mirjam
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since 1999-11-24

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7 posted 2000-03-02 12:59 PM

how cool is that - dancing with the Lord under the heavens on a cool night (ok well that's the image i got, sorry if it's wrong). I really liked this - it has real feel to it, and a sense of everything being under control when Jesus is there, that even when Satan cuts in, all we have to do is ask Christ to come and replace him, and he does. Really well-writen, i like your style, it's simple but conveys so much! Bless you!

BSC

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8 posted 2000-03-02 07:34 AM

Thank you all for responding so positively,
it's nice to think it was enjoyed.
mirjam - you got it right.....
Ellie - I'm glad, as I said, you truly have inspired me, and I thank you for that.

Bonnie

clynng2003
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9 posted 2000-03-02 01:43 PM

Great poem!! You have true talent, keep it up.

sandgrain
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Sycamore, IL, USA

10 posted 2000-03-03 07:32 PM

ellie inspires many, I'm sure, and you're also doing a great job of inspiring with such a melodic piece. Bless you

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