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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
When God sighs Do you feel the breeze Upon your weary cheek Does it lift your spirits then Do you find all that you do seek? When God whispers Do you hear the words He says close to your ear Does it answer what you ask Does it make life’s meaning clear? When God cries Do you feel His pain Can you understand His plight Do you know He cries for you And hopes you do what is right? When God smiles Do you feel the warmth Of the glow from his eyes Do you feel the whispers of love Do you feel His grateful sighs? |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow...such inspiring questions...What a beautiful way to make one think....Your poetry is always so ... inspiring to me. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Poet Devine; Awesome inspiration! I think we forget that God has all the emotions that we do. Lovely, just lovely! 02 |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Fabulous Devine! Not always feeling him in the breeze, but it sure will make me think of that next time I feel one! I saw the most awesome sunset tonight and was thanking God for such a beautiful painting! Oh the colors were purely awesome! Purple, and orange and pink, and deep orange. It got even more beautiful each moment as the colors got deeper. Breathtaking it was! Just had to share that. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a beautiful thought here PoetD... like Ellie said...expressing the emotions of Gods love like this..very nice... take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow! Beautiful poem PdV. This truly moved me. Glad to see you here in Spiritual...btw. Lovely work. michael |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind comments. I read that phrase "God Sighs"....and it triggered something...yes, I do believe in His guiding hand in my work sometimes...some poems write themselves, as this one did....Muse or God.. I prefer to think the latter... thanks again. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Poet DeVine, You are such a master at skillfully crafting your words and concepts into masterpieces. Your poem hear is delightful,inquisitive,and very suggestive of the emotional/and empathetic level of communication and fellowship we can and should have with our Loving Creator & God. A hardy Bravo to you dear! David< !signature--> "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- [This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 02-27-2000).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Ms devine... As always, beautiful beautiful poetry! you really asked some questions that made me sit and think. thank you! this was just so touching, i felt it with every bone in my body. Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Stephen Jones Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 53 |
I really liked this poem alot. Having an awareness of God is so needed in life, yet so many seem oblivious to his reality and presence. There is a bible verse that says "the invisible things of him from the creation of the world are clearly seen, being understood by the things that are made, even his eternal power and Godhead . . ." (Romans 1:20). I think that all of the universe is his artwork and has his signiture (or superior skill) imposed on every part. Keep up the good poetry! |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Another great piece from your talented mind you've been blessed with. Jesus often used questions to make people really think to learn. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This was a beautiful poem! Keep up the good work! "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so lovely, Sharon! Very well written! Denise |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Beautiful and inspiring. Tender, your love offering to Jesus. God Bless Alle'cram |
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mirjam Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246Auckland, New Zealand |
One of the things that really made this poem is the questions you asked. I got shivers up my spine reading this, i really loved it! I esp liked the last stanza, and wow your ryhming is so good! |
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