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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
As I wake up what do I see darkness, My eyes are open, yet they are shut... Darkness surrounds the room, like a weed around a rose, strangling the sunlight as it trys to grasp onto the walls... But it's not the physical light that concerns me, the light I am talking about is within... The light that gives life and nourishes my soul, but this light is slowly dimming as my soul slowly dies... My soul trys to grasp the light, like a single flower beneath towering trees, straining to reach each strand of sunlight that escapes the arms of the giants... Trying to live and become, a thing of beauty, within a world of darkness... I slowly open my eyes, and my mind to the light, I feel the life and the strength to live and move on... To become that beautiful flower, that beautiful woman, that beautiful human being... What the world thinks may seem impossible, a life thriving in darkness, becoming a beautiful, strong individual... It may seem impossible, but open your eyes and grasp the light creeping through the darkness. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
There is a light out there that even the blind may see. It warms the coldest hearts, and it comforts the most distraugh individuals. This poem tells me never to let worldly expectations keep you from it. Beautiful work. michael |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"I slowly open my eyes, and my mind to the light, I feel the life and the strength to live and move on... To become that beautiful flower, that beautiful woman, that beautiful human being..." this is such a beautiful expression...reminding us to never give up on ourselves or our faith...very well written...thank you for sharing it with us... as always...we live in the light... ![]() |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
A lovely work. It's amazing how long I lived in the dark, not even knowing I was until I began to see the light of God's love. Suddenly, nothing else seemed to matter. Your writing brings this to mind as you strain for every fragment of it. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was stupendous! EXCELLENT in describing this! You all just amaze me at your words and bringing things up from such a different perspective! God Bless you ALL! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I love the way this flowed so well, right from your heart. The darkness is a terrible place, and, until I was filled with His Love, Only then did I realize how awful it was. |
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