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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-11-09 11:41 AM


A Voice

I'm sitting
in this boat
sailing
across the sea
the tides
that rocked
me gently
are turbulent now.
I don't know
where I am
which way do I go?
This is not supposed
to happen to me
I'm scared
can anybody help me?
Nobody around
to help
I'm all alone
I hear a voice
where's it coming from?
It's telling me
I'm not alone
I hear it say,
relax
and I will guide you.


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Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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Southern Florida
1 posted 1999-11-09 12:52 PM


Very,very lovely Lost Dreamer......

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Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
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2 posted 1999-11-09 01:25 PM


Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
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Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-11-09 02:51 PM


How beautiful Lost Dreamer...thanks for sharing this

Jenny Lee

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 1999-11-09 07:16 PM


Lovely Lost Dreamer. : )
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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5 posted 1999-11-09 08:46 PM


This is very lovely, LD. I enjoyed this. It had a relaxing quality to it!

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Denise


Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
6 posted 1999-11-09 08:47 PM


Very nice, LD - There's not much of a choice out there at sea, is there?
Julie
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since 1999-08-20
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Houston, TX
7 posted 1999-11-09 08:50 PM


LD...when all is quiet and all alone we can hear that voice leading us on...nice work.
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
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California
8 posted 1999-11-09 09:12 PM


And that voice does guide, if we are willing to listen. Beautiful poem, L.D. I get a sense of comfort in reading it.

Michael

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
9 posted 1999-11-10 06:41 AM


I thank all of you for your kind responses. I wrote this poem about a year ago and it is one I truely enjoy and get a relaxed feeling from also.
Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
10 posted 1999-11-15 01:44 AM


You give a very valuable point here...It seems a lot of times when we are alone or even just feel alone, your scared, you dont know what to do, and anything else like this...when you hear a voice (Many of which it is God speaking to them) it is a comforting peace to know He is there with you and you are not alone. Cause He will surely guide you where you need to be, calme your fears, relax your heart, and be a friend when you are lonely. It is always such a blessing to know He is there. Amen to this poem! Truly enjoyable! Thank you for sharing!


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