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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

0 posted 2000-02-09 10:19 PM

I wrote this a long time ago...hope you enjoy it. This is kind of from the beginning to end.

There was a world before this one,
Our souls existed, God called us His sons.
Ol' Satan he was good then too,
Till he tried to deceive me and you.
His mind puffed up, he wanted God's place,
And went astray, instead of accepting God's grace.
He (Satan) drew a third of God's children,
Thru deception and lies and now the world which we live in.
So your soul in the flesh, was placed on Earth,
Placed at conception, before your birth.
So as a babe, not remembering before,
God opened the heaven, He opened the door.
Born as a babe, from God above,
He put us here, because of His love.
He wanted to give us all a fresh start,
He gave us freewill, and hoped we'd be smart.
He loves us so much, He gave us a choice,
On whom we will follow, God's will? or Satan's voice?
He put us here to make up our mind,
It's not forced upon us, it's ours to find.
The love He gave us, give in return,
Then He will teach, and we will learn.
Satan is trying to deceive once more,
Just like he did in the world before.
Remember God says, you know the truth,
I sent you My Word, He was living proof.
He's calling to rememberance, the truth you once heard,
And told us again in the Bible, His Word.

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 02-09-2000).]

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

1 posted 2000-02-10 12:26 PM

Wonderful 'becca! I enjoyed this!

Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!

thumper4him
Junior Member

since 2000-02-06

Posts 27
Newport Beach Ca

2 posted 2000-02-10 12:35 PM

i found this very obvious, blunt which is good for a subject matter such as this and it rhymed too, which i can say more then most of my poems do. Good Job!

you can't make footprints in the sand of times that you are sitting down

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2000-02-10 03:21 AM

Rebecca, this is great! A beautiful reminder of the solid truth! You are truly gifted.

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-02-10 02:37 PM

this is SO great WhiteDove and a beautiful reminder of things we take for granted... I liked the part about remembering we have choices...its up to us.
janet marie

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 2000-02-10 08:53 PM

Thank you all!

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

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