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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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It's Your Choice You walk aimlessly in the night carelessly tripping over curbstones. Delightfully Satan reaches out his hand bidding you to give him this dance in the darkness. You fall to his bait willingly, the dance has only just begun as each step another broken connection in a once beautifully connected life of love. God watches crying tears for you knowing you just made a destructive choice he waits for you to call upon him to forgive you, then he will come to step in as your dance partner. God dances graciously no toes does he break, no false images does he create. It's your choice, do you dance with Satan, or do you let God step in graciously to reconnect the broken pieces that Satan stepped on? |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
What a powerful message! We all fall and dance with Satan once in a while. But hopefully we're smart enough to ask God to step in! Love it! Where ya been? Missed you around here! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
How powerful is this image? I had a chill reading it. It just so happens that dancing with Jesus, is one of my favorite images. Thanks for a great poem! 02 |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
So easily we can trip or slip discovering we're where we don't belong. What a picture you've painted of changing partners, like Jesus is waiting to cut in. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I think this deserves to back up to the top! I found this back here all lonely. May others read it and enjoy it like I did!  |
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mirjam Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246Auckland, New Zealand |
Yeah, were've ya been? Reading this i realised how missed your work is! What a powerful image, i like it! Funny how he waits for us to give him the cue to cut in, so often we just expect him to but in! Dancing with Jesus is definately what i feel like doing today! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank you all, I had a period of no brain activity, but as I am sure some of you have seen I'm back with a passion. I am about to post a new one in Spiritual right now, I'm not sure if it's right, I kind of went with what was being delivered if you know what I mean. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
I think you packaged this one up uniquely and got your point across well. Good poem, Lost Dreamer! "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ I would say that God has filled your dance card. Very nice and so easy to follow. I personally liked it very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow, what an amazing poem, it immediately draws pictures on the mind...and a powerful message, one we all need to be reminded of every now and then.... |
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