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shock gospel
Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 33


0 posted 2000-02-03 03:19 AM


                "Let's Talk"
Let's talk about things you don't want to talk about.. all the things you dont want to say..
You know, the stuff you think if you ignore long enough, will eventually just go away.
Let's talk, let's get personal.. just us two, there's more than meets the eye.
If everthings o.k. and your hearts not in trouble, then why do I hear it cry?
I'll show you your heart, the place your held captive and a Truth that makes you free.
But I can't do a thing to set you in flight, untill your completely honest with me.
Let's talk about Me and get your mind off of you..
'cause without what I got, there's no chance you'll pull through.
Let's talk, let's talk, isn't this cool, our conversation carried by the wind..
And when your thankful to be able to talk to Me..
just remember it's through Jesus your friend.


© Copyright 2000 shock gospel - All Rights Reserved
Vincent Spaulding
Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 59

1 posted 2000-02-03 06:32 AM


A wonderful invitational poem. We're fortunate for God's patience. In the second to last line change "your" to "you're"--it's a common mistake.
deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2000-02-03 06:46 AM


Wonderful theme here,Shock Gospel.
A God who truly seeks personal involvement in our lives, a God who really wants to help us-and who truly can help up-if we will tear down the wall of personal pride/nice illusions/and unholy pretentions.  Yes, your poem says a lot that needs to be heard and personally considered--so we can possess
what we profess.  Thanks for this wake up call,   David

 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-


Willem
Member
since 1999-11-18
Posts 139
Inverness, FL, USA
3 posted 2000-02-03 08:32 PM


What beautiful witnessing!  Good poetry, moving message.  Yes, Jesus wants to be our friend, but we are sometimes not ready to accept Him.  Even if The Book tells us He is there and He wants to forgive us, we still refuse to believe He  h a s  already forgiven us...  We must stop fighting back, resisting His sacrificing love. There is no way around Him...

Willem

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-02-03 08:41 PM


WOW! Your poem says it all!!
Welcome to Passions!

Denise

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-02-03 08:52 PM


Hi, welcome from me as well,
this is great...very uplifting message, and I could even see this one being a song, it flows great. take care Janet Marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
6 posted 2000-02-03 10:17 PM


WELCOME! Jesus is always trying to get our attention, and you put this message across very well. He pursues us like the lover He is. This is an inspiring poem and I needed to hear it to be reminded that I need to listen more and talk less. Thank you.

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shock gospel
Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 33

7 posted 2000-02-04 12:34 PM


TO ALL THOSE ABOVE, AND TO FOLLOW, I THANK YOU, GOD THANKS YOU, cHi-cHi ReVeRa THANKS
YOU,
P.S. GoD liKes it wheN his chiLderN hear Him.
        
            SHOCK GOSPEL


 

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
8 posted 2000-02-04 10:10 PM


So right! When we focus on selves we tend to fall. We need to focus on God instead! Welcome to passions if I haven't done that already!  

I may be outdated here but taking the chance to feel really stupid....who is cHi-cHi ReVeRa ?

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
9 posted 2000-02-05 08:30 PM


Oh how great it is to feel free to pour our heart out to the Lord, and how well you put that point across.
shock gospel
Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 33

10 posted 2000-02-05 09:50 PM


Who is the elusive cHi-cHi ReVeRa? I'm afraid that will only be revealed when we figure out.. Where WaLdO is. For only WaLdO knows. As for how I know she's thankful, Jesus told me.. He said she hooked up with him oh.. 'bout 1895 and she is either really thankful for having lived such a long wonderful life or thankful her old butt finally died, But again the futility ends with the hard fact that only WaLdO Knows and well Jesus too of course. See Ya!
stevie g. or shock gospel or the shockster,
awww.. see what you all started, now I'm all confused!


 

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