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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2002-08-05 11:21 AM







Love Stars

Behind storm clouds, stars disappear
in shades of hate and gloom of fear
for Love that was has gone astray
and all that's left are skies of gray.

Below storm clouds, the rivers flood
and turn the green grass into mud
for Love that was has turned to tears
and all that sorrows seem none hears.

Above storm clouds, the atmosphere
remains the same and still is clear
for Love remains up shinning bright
and filling hearts with Hope and Light.

Around storm clouds, a silver glow
shines through to touch the world below
for Love will not its presence veer
and won't be swayed by what appears.

About storm clouds, stars reappear
to make well  known that GOD is near
for Love outshines our deepest doubts
and brings us Joy when stars come out.


-Lighthouse Bob


© Copyright 2002 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
VAS
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since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2002-08-05 02:46 PM


How do you do that wonderful framing?

Your poem is impeccable, too, in its rhyme and soft, assurring message.

So glad someone else has popped in here since I posted yesterday. It's been so quiet. Much more than the last time I visited.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

miriam
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2 posted 2002-08-05 03:35 PM


What a wonderful inspiration...great to start my day

miriam coronado



Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-08-05 04:56 PM


Bob, this is very very beautiful and inspirational.
Enjoyed so very much!
~Hugs~

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind
4 posted 2002-08-05 05:01 PM


This is awesome! Very inspiring. Someday I want to write like that! Love you my friend.

Eliza Simmons
~He is amazing regardless how we feel.
~He is amazing because He cares us regardless our beliefs.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-08-05 07:39 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Robert, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, yes, the stars are all His gentle loving eyes guiding us and will make sure we are always safe and in good hands! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Member Patricius
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6 posted 2002-08-06 11:27 AM


Bob:  I love this one! You  have done a masterful job and the images really shine through. Especially the messge.

Betty Lou Hebert

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
7 posted 2002-08-07 09:50 AM


This is wondeful Bob. Both in it's message and it's presentation.
2dalimit
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Mississippi coast
8 posted 2002-08-08 08:47 AM


I’m never disappointed with your creativity. You covered the subject on all sides very well.

Thanks,
Melton

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9 posted 2002-08-09 12:43 PM


Wonderfule Bob.  And I am glad you have found the silver lining.  Love, Joyce
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