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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2002-07-30 12:01 PM



Prayers

The house was small, the children numbered four
And as they climbed up to the second floor
I said, before you sleep, mother will come
And listen to the prayers of every one
Then when you lay your head in slumber’s nest
A angel’s peace will sooth your little chest

The first one prayed that she would have her dream
A three year old with lots of plans to scheme
Then mother added, don’t forget to pray
For those who have no toys with which to play
And may your heart be giving with no end
I love you darling, go to sleep, Amen

The second was a little boy of six
I pray dear God, please give me magic tricks
I said His miracles no tricks employ
For He has blessed a sickly little boy
Please don’t forget how ill your little friend
I love you, keep him in your prayers, Amen

The third one prayed for all his family
Then kneeling down and looking up at me
He asked God at the tender age of nine
To bless me with His love, pure and divine
And when his prayer was coming to an end
He said, dear God, I need a bike, Amen

The twelve year old was struggling to pray
For tears were falling with each word he’d say
His dog was gone and I could not console
The pain that pierced the innocence of soul
I said I know he was your dearest friend
I love you, May you find the strength, Amen

My own heart was now weeping as they slept
As thoughts of things I couldn’t give had crept
Through window panes, that couldn’t mask the winds
That whistled through the fields and barren limbs
And then a whispering voice said, “My dear friend
Your love is all they’ll ever need, Amen”

Elizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (07-30-2002 12:02 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-07-30 12:45 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Elizabeth, this had me both crying in grief and joy, I know how hard it must feel for a child to experience a loss so young, I too felt that when my kitty Holly passed away from a fever and that broke my heart, yet I felt learning from Him that it was so lucky to have me as an owner and that truly my Holly would never break away from my heart because I would always love her! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) God Bless You, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all children who face heartbreak so young yet may they also be blessed knowing their love will always be with them, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

miriam
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2 posted 2002-07-30 01:21 PM


so touching Elizabeth.  You kept me teary eyed!!!  I'll be praying for you and your children.  You're right, all you they will ever need is your love.

miriam coronado



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3 posted 2002-07-30 06:13 PM


Elizabeth:  Another gem from your pen! Such an uplifting and touching story.  Your talent is amazing!

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2002-07-30 07:31 PM


Elizabeth, your writing always leaves me in awe.
This one is no exception...
I love it!!
~Hugs, Nancy~

Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2002-08-03 01:08 AM


This is beautiful Elizabeth and makes me yearn for those innocent years again.  Joyce
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