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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
this is my soul take it and let me bleed these are yours sins pressed into my heart these are my words you hear them and replace them all these are my eyes through which i see hate i am your savior your brother the only one you hate me for that your hands won't beleive these are my people i hate to watch them sin i cry to my father why do they hate me so? these are the people my father placed on the land they do the bad things that make up my body these are my hands you've bloodied and nailed down these are my feet bound tightly and pinned this is my voice crying out onto the lord i carry my cross across six miles of land this is my last breath i can hardly hear myself my hands are too weak to rebel and i slowly die life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
(sorry it took so long to reply.. i forgot which forum you posted in) Though, there are no replies yet, other than mine... I'm sure they'll add. This is a beautiful poem, though I'm not 'spiritual.' Nevertheless, I loved it. It pained a picture... I could see what I believe is UN-existing, very clearly. Thank you for painting this picture, and giving me a little strand of hope. Keep writing, Abby. Keep holding on, my friend, never let go. (sorry, I'm emotional right now ... forgive me if this was strange at all) "Without you, without you, everything falls apart. |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
lol look sara, i try to write a good, nice poem and yet again, it's dark! lol i just can't get over how my poetry no matter how much i try is ALWAYS dark! life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
It was good and nice. It wasn't gory, or bad. I truthfully liked it. There's nothing wrong with it. Don't doubt yourself. "Without you, without you, everything falls apart. |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
I really think that this poem is wonderful...I hope you don't mind...but I printed it out and it's posted in my office  miriam coronado |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
lol that's ok i don't mind at all!  life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Abby, I know just how you feel and whenever I think of how He suffered it too breaks my heart, yet I feel despite all that suffering and anguish, there is a far more important meaning of faith behind it all, that it is that He wanted to suffer so He can save us all from sin and show us that we still can all be forgiven if we find penitence! (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) He died to save us all, sweet friend, this is very powerfully intense, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Abby, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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